The Last Jar of Honey (revised)
The last jar of honey I'm sitting on a bench watching my beard grow, waiting for a bus with Al Gore and a sweating Polar Bear from some place up North. And Al is offering the bear another chocolate...
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ha! good good! love the content & flow of it, but it did get a bit clunky around "without it, I won't be able to save the world", but i'm not sure why. maybe too many lines in that al gore bit or...
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thanks, courtney! i tried to tighten that line a little.
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bumpety bump hadn't read this one! hey, hey - where is that rayman?
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some where raaaaayyyy, where arrrrrrrre you? I like your poem
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